Revisions

For my revisions I will need to first add pictures to my table of contents. Without them it looks kind of boring and could easily be better with pictures. Next I would need to fix the borders/crop of the magazine in my blog. The way it came out it is very hard to see and very small. Once I fix the crop of the screenshots it should look fine. I have a small amount of white space to fill in but i could fix that by rearranging the pictures and text, and it might also make the magazine look more like a magazine rather than a website article. Overall I think that I did fairly well but these revisions will be very helpful.

Midterm Magazine